Hey y'all. I hope you had a great weekend. We had a busy but definitely fun one with the inlaws in town. I am so excited to scrap the pictures of the pirate cruise we went on. WOOHOO! Anyways, here is a double page layout that I got done with my May Counterfeit kit. I am super excited that I got to use not one but TWO of the sandcastles I had laying around in my stash. I feel like this layout is missing something so any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. How are you doing with your Counterfeit Kit?
Love the layout. I suggest that even though "fun in the sun" is the title, you could put what beach it is in large letters...that's what missing for me- a large title. I often have a title and a subtitle. I am making my own embellishments with my kit, and working on my mini. xoxo
ReplyDeleteLove the layout.. agree, the title is getting lost. What a cute picture of the mermaid with the shell tail. Very clever!
ReplyDeleteI also think you need a larger title and use fun in the sun as a subtitle. Love the layout. The mermaid is just great!
ReplyDeleteLooks like it was a really fun day.
ReplyDeleteI like your layout as is, but since you think it needs something... You could try moving your "fun in the sun" and sun embellishments up so that they string across the kraft cardstock just slightly higher than they are now. It will bring a little more attention to them.
Your LO looks fine to me, but you have some good comments above~~ that mermaid picture is awesome!!
ReplyDeleteI really like your layout but i also agree it needs something in the upper part of the kraft paper. A title would be great and you could do fun in the sun and use the sun embellishment for the title. Thanks for sharing. love the mermaid.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun summer page! Maybe a bolder title would pop off the page more. My favorite photo is the mermaid, as well! I think I'll have my daughter do that this summer!
ReplyDeleteVery cute photos - wonderfully scrapped. Love the mermaid shot - we do that too - but never embellish with shells. Cool!
ReplyDeleteIt looks great- I love that you were able to use those sandcastles!
ReplyDeleteThose photos are so fun, looks like a wonderful time at the beach! I like the castle embellies. x
ReplyDeleteThose sand castle embellishments are so cute. I wouldn't change a thing on this double! You have scrapped so many great photos here and I think that it is fine for this to be the focus of the LO. Sometimes a small title gives interest to a LO and keeping yours as is maintains the perfect balance of composition. I sometimes wonder if in years to come we will look back at our LO's and wonder why we titled them all. hee hee
ReplyDeleteCute cute cute!!!
ReplyDeleteawesome two pager .... :)
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